RE: Fiction: The competition (Eng-Spn)
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I like the suspense employed in the story.
A native tale says that he who dines with the deviled must have a very long spoon.
It was just disadvantageous that he came late for he would have a better chance.
Good story line.
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I'm glad you liked my story, thanks for your support @oyebolu. It motivated me to write something suspenseful with a degrading and mysterious setting. Thanks for the rating, I appreciate it!