RE: Fiction: Your fortune is gone (Eng-Spn)
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Okay, I'd be happy to edit the text and remove the three lines. They're just part of the layout I used to enhance the text and highlight certain situations I consider important. These help to convey the chronological thread of the story, which describes three different settings: The Peterson House, The Highway, and Chinatown. Along these same lines, the story expresses the thoughts of certain characters, such as "Nanny," whom I've also highlighted. It uses a basic writing technique adapted to any reader. Now I'll focus on editing the text as instructed, according to your own requirements. @agmoore and
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