RE: Fiction: Fire alert (Alerta de incendio) [EN/ES]
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I'm glad this story had a happy ending. I thought it had something to do with the gargoyles, so it was surprising to read it was actually a hostage. It's an interesting premise, and memorable setting given that it's a fire station.
The fire engine's sirens echoed through the nighttime city. After about 30 minutes of travel, they arrived at a grayish Gothic-style house with red doors. The strangest thing was that they didn't see any fire. Stel got out of the fire truck and headed for the door.
This is a great description that provides some sound and action to the story. Rich details like this evoke images that make the story more salient. It's an entertaining story.
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Thank you, my friend, for your very analytical and enjoyable comment. I'm very happy to hear your words, and it's always a pleasure to see you in my posts.
We continue reading.
Excellent day.