RE: Fiction: Your fortune is gone (Eng-Spn)

I know you had a different vision for the story, but I simply could not follow your vision. This version I understand perfectly. It is a wonderful story, brilliant. I love the scheme of it, the refrain, the foreshadowing, the horrified attendant, the final mound of snow at the end.

You do write like a poet, and I truly appreciate the precision of language that this implies.

Thanks very much for making those edits. They weren't 'required', but I couldn't curate without them.