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1 day ago

RE: Fiction: The competition (Eng-Spn) I try to leave no space unused Another way of saying this is every word does it's job. That energy drives the narrative forward.

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RE: Fiction: The competition (Eng-Spn) Brilliantly visual! I can see a film short made from this. The atmosphere is oppressive and heavy with intimations of doom. A gripping story, @nachomolina2

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16 days ago

RE: Fiction: Your fortune is gone (Eng-Spn) I know you had a different vision for the story, but I simply could not follow your vision. This version I understand perfectly. It is a wonderful story, brilliant. I love the…

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RE: Fiction: Your fortune is gone (Eng-Spn) Hello @nachomolina2, I don't know what is going on in the story. I've started it several times. Is the car on the grass, or in the shed? How is the car suddenly on the slippery…

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29 days ago

RE: Fiction: The Two Faces of Leyla (ENG/SPN) I never thought my story would cause any inconvenience to the @theinkwell team given its length of over 1,500 words. I simply tried to write a story that was sufficiently…

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29 days ago

RE: Fiction: The Two Faces of Leyla (ENG/SPN) I love your writing. It is uniquely you, yet as I read I sensed echoes of Poe, of Borges, even of ETA Hoffmann. Your story is heavy with atmosphere and suggestion, truly a…

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