RE: ¿Qué haces aquí en mi búsqueda? What are you doing here in my search?

Hi @grailent.kerb. You chose an interesting story format, and this is an entertaining story.

We wanted to provide a few tips for you:

• This is a fictional story, so it should be tagged as #fiction, not #creativenonfiction. (Fictional stories are made up from your imagination Creative nonfiction stories are from your real life experiences.)
• There are some excellent resources in our catalog of fiction writing tips that you might benefit from, such as our article on how to write dialogue
• When you write comments on other writers' stories, be sure to say something about the story itself, such as something you liked. Comments like "Good luck' do not indicate whether or not you read and enjoyed the story.