Contest: A picture is worth a thousand words.

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What do i see?

......I see the sunlight filters through the petals, causing a resplendent glow and lens look on the frame of the petals, in the background appears green plants,
Showing a bright sky.

What do you feel?
I feel happiness, the petals gives me hope for a better tomorrow , i feel the is a need to move on.
something positive is on the way .

You speak to me convincingly, with the
Certainty that only the gods can offer ;
Not in proverbs, but plainly; solutions that
Only you can proffer ;

You speak with certainty like one that looks
Into the crystal ball;
You don't dissipate your energy, aimlessly to remind
me of my frailty; except the rains must fall.

Thank you alll for reading.

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Thank you for joining pic1000

It's helpful if you add: < br> (without whitespace) between what you feel and the poem and the end of the poem and your last sentence. It makes your poem jump out more and better to read.

Interesting you see fragile flowers that won't blossom long for a better tomorrow.

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