RE: Fiction: The competition (Eng-Spn)
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Hi @kristabel123, how are you? Your comment is great. Yes, indeed, just as you say, I took great care with the details and the choice of some atypical materials, others classic, to design the atmosphere. The moves and the movement of the chess pieces also have a certain logic and technicality. Otherwise, a rather peculiar game with an unexpected guest:
"The tunic barely exposed the bare forearm; the hood, like a black hole, had the intrinsic depth of an infinite abyss that leaves one to guess a bare skin, the one whose face bore the embedded smile of its staunch supporter..."
I love this part because it's truly sinister and crazy. A psychological thriller that induces chaos and degradation. Thanks for reading my work and detailing it in your comment. I really appreciate it!!!
#theinkwell