RE: Fiction: The Two Faces of Leyla (ENG/SPN)

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First of all, thank you for reading my post and providing this important feedback on my writing. I've actually been writing "original" creative poetry on Hive.blog for years, leaning mostly toward the romance, existential, gothic, and psychological thriller genres. I never thought my story would cause any inconvenience to the @theinkwell team given its length of over 1,500 words. I simply tried to write a story that was sufficiently complete and captivating. Always in line with the contest theme, as suggested by the "Catalog of Fiction Writing Tips":

  • Excellent first lines
  • Good setup
  • Well-developed characters
  • Integration of action, dialogue, and narrative
  • A conflict that intrigues the reader
  • A "story arc" that results in the resolution of the conflict and brings the story to a satisfying conclusion.
    *And, of course, we look for well-edited stories that are free of typos or grammatical errors: use the free Grammarly tool for grammar and spelling checks (and do not use AI-powered writing or rewording tools for proofreading).

In addition to taking into account my personal tastes, my vision of writing, and my own form of expression as a dedicated writer, without limitations or any other reason that might affect my creative sensibility, imaginative power, etc. Thank you also for your receptiveness to this post, which I appreciate; I'll see you another time.



Antes que nada, gracias por leer mi post y emitir este importante criterio sobre mi escritura. Por otra parte, efectivamente llevo años escribiendo en Hive.blog poesía creativa "Original" que se inclina mayormente al género romántico, existencial, gótico, también algo de thriller psicológico. Nunca pensé que mi historia causaría algún tipo de inconveniente al equipo @theinkwell dado su extensión superior a 1500 palabras. Solo traté de escribir un relato lo suficientemente completo, así como, cautivador. Siempre en concordancia al tema del concurso tal como lo sugiere el "Catálogo de consejos para contar historias":

  • Excelentes primeras líneas
  • Buena configuración
  • Personajes bien desarrollados
  • Integración de acción, diálogo y narrativa
  • Un conflicto que intriga al lector
  • Un "arco argumental" que resulta en la resolución del conflicto y lleva la historia a una conclusión satisfactoria.
  • Y, por supuesto, buscamos historias bien editadas que no estén plagadas de errores tipográficos o gramaticales: utilice la herramienta gratuita Grammarly para la revisión gramatical y ortográfica (y no utilice herramientas de escritura o reformulación de IA para la revisión).

Además de tener en cuenta mis gustos personales, mi visión sobre la escritura y mi forma de expresión propia como escritor dedicado, sin limitaciones, u otra razón que pueda afectar mi sensibilidad creativa, poder de la imaginación, etc. Igualmente gracias por la receptividad conferida de su parte a esta publicación lo cual aprecio, será hasta otra ocasión.



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I never thought my story would cause any inconvenience to the @theinkwell team given its length of over 1,500 words. I simply tried to write a story that was sufficiently complete and captivating.

Your story was a pleasure to read. We set parameters because there is only so much time in a day. Right now, for example, I'm dealing with real-life home challenges that limit the time I can give to Hive, and the Inkwell in particular. But your story was a nice break. I'm glad I decided to leap in and read, despite its length.

It's hard to achieve what you did in 1500 words. I get it. You're a great writer. I'll have to look at some of your other material when life is less demanding in my home.

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