RE: Fiction: When words fall silent (Cuando las palabras callan) [EN/ES]

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This is a tender story of what happens to couples as their marriage falls into routine. I like the descriptions of the setting, which are rich in psychological exploration of the theme of silence and to a certain extent, renewal. Nicely done!

The husband takes the bottle of wine and pours some for his wife. He gently caresses the hand of his lover, friend, and companion. Her blue eyes feel that fire of youthful love again, maddening and sacrificial for that man with cinnamon skin and brown eyes.



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It's always a pleasure to read your comments, my friend.

I really liked your analysis of the story and I appreciate you taking the time to write these words.

Excellent day.

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