RE: Fiction: Valley of Elms (Eng-Spn)
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This story has a rich suspenseful atmosphere with elements of the supernatural. I like the focus on the relic, which gives the environment an archaic feel and an aura of mystery.
In my personal opinion, a relic has no expiration date, it is something created for the end times and if in some way the use of the object would have been truncated by the passing of the cycles that human civilization fulfills
At times the story also has a Lovecraftian intensity sprinkled throughout the narrative, which I enjoyed very much.
And the valley of elms sought the heartbeat of my talisman, and the intrinsic voices became one. The medallion's cams stirred, as if they were arms and legs, while its polished face took on the indisputable enormity of the blackest heart.
It was an entertaining and mysterious tale.
Well, of course I have! I've learned a few things lately thanks to my perseverance and discipline. I'm glad you liked it, @litguru. For this occasion, I gradually progressed toward a narrative infused with authentic elements that evoked the contest's theme: "In the Time Before." The rest is simply magic! Letting your imagination run wild without hindering the creative process, trying to weave the most complete story possible, dictated by the writer's vein, into 1,500 words. Thanks for your brilliant comment. I continue to learn new resources, hand in hand with the @theinkwell team.
Bueno, claro que sí! he aprendido algunas cosas ultimamente gracias a mi constancia y disciplina. Me alegra te haya gustado @litguru. Para esta ocasión fui avanzando gradualmente en una narrativa provista de elementos auténticos que evocaran el tema del concurso: "In the time before". Lo demás, es simplemente magia!. Dejar libre la imaginación sin poner abstaculos al proceso creativo tratando de hilvanar en 1500 palabras la historia más completa posible dictada por la vena del escritor. Gracias por tu brillante comentario. Sigo aprendiendo nuevos recursos, de la mano con el equipo @theinkwell.