The Smell of Betrayal-ZapFic50Friday: 23rd January 2026! Write a story in PRECISELY 50 words.

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Esteban could not explain to himself how it was possible that after so much time, that old sofa still kept intact the scent of his beloved; to feel this scent was to remember the pain of her betrayal, a stab that each time broke his heart into a thousand pieces.

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This is my participation to the Write a story with EXACTLY 50 words initiative of @zapfic.club, in the Freewriters community, @geila encourage you to participate.

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A very engaging short story. The elements of betrayal and disillusionment blend perfectly in every line.

Thanks for sharing your micro-story with us.

Excellent day.

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