RE: Prolonged Descent
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Oh my. More poetry than story. Perhaps I'm wrong, but it's stream of consciousness and not intended to be understood so much as experienced with this character. It's about how he feels moving from work (an office?) to home with his family, and being alienated in both environments. An interesting work, but I think, as a reader, I want just a tiny bit more clarity to truly appreciate it.
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Yeah, I got rather carried away and although what started with me crafting a story, I tried to make sense of it, I got bored and posted it anyway, Thank you for your feedback