(en.es) The truth about the hypocrite ✦ La verdad del hipócrita (Fiction)
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✦ The truth about the hypocrite ✦

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In the neighborhood, Marcos was also known as the sower of truth. But was it really true? There wasn't an afternoon that went by without him being surrounded by people loudly proclaiming the truth, because, according to him, honesty was "that mirror that doesn't lie." And everyone always agreed with Marcos; everyone nodded in agreement because they knew he was one of those people who never hid anything.
Beside him, his wife Elena concentrated on her sewing and knitting. His daughter Laura wove bracelets and thought: "The truth hurts, but lies end up killing your soul." Perhaps that phrase would be the mantra that would accompany her throughout her life.
But one night, something changed. There are nights when the shadows weigh more than any pretty phrase.
That morning, Marcos woke up with his chest heavy with sorrow. On the nightstand, his phone screen remained lit, displaying an anonymous message: "I know about the accident, and I know it wasn't an accident." Marcos read the message once, twice, three times, and his trembling fingers immediately went to delete it. No digital trace of the letter could remain, but the trace had already been embedded in Marcos's memory like a splinter of wood.
Three months earlier, under a torrential downpour that lashed relentlessly on the highway, Félix, his coworker and business partner, was driving beside him. They were having a heated argument. Félix had discovered Marcos's worst secret: a near-constant monthly diversion of funds, all to the same account. The amounts weren't huge, but they were enough to shatter trust, to break the image of Marcos as the sole possessor of truth, reason, and justice.
“People trust us,” Félix said that afternoon. Marcos, on the other hand, didn’t answer; he remained silent. In that silence, he saw a dog cross the street, or rather, he wanted to see it… He swerved violently, the car skidded, a concrete post appeared in the windshield right in front of Félix, then a noise, and then silence.
Félix remained calm, like someone asleep in their seat. Marcos, with a few bruises, was the one who called the ambulance.
“It was a dog,” he told the patrol cars. “I tried to avoid it.” And everyone believed him, because Marcos always told the truth, because Marcos had a perfect family, because Marcos was a friend to his friends…
Félix remained in that bed, in that hospital, inert, waiting for a breath.
"Maybe he won't wake up, maybe he will, maybe he won't speak, maybe he won't walk, maybe he won't remember..." the doctors said.
"Wake up, Felix, wake up. I'll confess everything." But Felix didn't wake up.
Meanwhile, Marcos continued acting as if he possessed the absolute truth. One Sunday morning, under the warm morning sun, he dared to say at one of the neighborhood meetings, alongside his wife and daughter:
"We have to stay united in this community. Lies only create divisions within us."
Everyone applauded, everyone except his young daughter. Many neighbors approached him after the meeting to congratulate him on his words, his wisdom, and for being the kind of businessman who always wanted the best for his community. Marcos's eyes lit up, and for a moment he forgot that his entire life depended on a lie.
Marcos's breakdown didn't come from the walls of his workplace, from that office that concealed secrets; it came from the crumbling walls of his home.
That evening at dinner, his daughter Laura mustered her courage and spoke:
"Dad, you're a hypocrite."
Marcos froze, white as a sheet. It was the only exchange that evening, but it was enough for Marcos to understand. Laura simply got up from her chair and locked herself in her room.
From the other side of the door, Marcos heard a stifled sob. He wanted to call out to her, to say something, anything to mend the broken silence. But his lips wouldn't obey. He could only rest his forehead against the cold wood and stay there, listening to his daughter cry in secret. Elena walked past him without looking at him, went upstairs, and also closed a door. The echo of two locks was his only company that night.
That night, when all the lights went out, Marcos's phone light came on again, another message:
"I'm sorry, Dad."
Laura climbed out the window without warning and went to the nearest police station. In her hands, she carried the whole truth: her father's private ledger, with every transaction recorded, and a recording of his voice confessing in his sleep. Every night, while everyone else slept, Laura heard her father crying and confessing the crime over and over again.
No one saw her leave. The moon hid behind the clouds as if it didn't want to be a witness. Laura walked twelve blocks, the notebook clutched to her chest, her phone recording in her pocket. She wasn't wearing a bracelet. She no longer needed to be reminded that lies kill the soul because she felt it with every step. When she arrived at the station, her hands trembled so much that it took her almost a minute to push open the glass door.
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The Inkwell Combined Writing Prompt #26 ~ Fiction or Creative Nonfiction▶️https://ecency.com/created/@theinkwell/the-inkwell-combined-writing-prompt-26--fiction-or-creative-nonfiction
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✦ La verdad del hipócrita ✦

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En el barrio Marcos era también llamado: el sembrador de las verdades. Pero en verdad, ¿era cierto? No había tarde que no estuviera rodeado de personas diciendo verdades a mil voces porque según él la honestidad era : ese espejo que no miente. Y todos estaban siempre de acuerdo con Marcos, todos asentían porque sabían que era de esas personas que nunca se ocultaba.
A su lado su esposa Elena se concentraba en las labores de costura y tejido. Su hija Laura tejía pulseras, y pensaba: La verdad duele, pero la mentira termina matándote el alma. Quizás esa frase sería el mantra que la acompañaría en toda su vida.
Pero una noche algo cambió. Hay noches donde las sombras pesan más que cualquier frase bonita.
Esa madrugada Marcos se despertó con el pecho oprimido por el pesar. En la mesita de noche la pantalla de su teléfono permanecía encendida y en ella un mensaje anónimo: Sé lo del accidente, y sé que no fue un accidente. Marcos leyó una, dos, tres veces el mensaje y sus dedos temblorosos fueron inmediatamente a borrarlos. No podía quedar rastro digital de la misiva, mas el rastro ya se había incrustado en la memoria de Marcos como una astilla de madera.
Tres meses atrás, bajo una torrencial lluvia que caía implacable sobre la carretera, Félix su compañero de trabajo y socio de negocios, iba a su lado en su auto. Ambos discutían acalorados. Félix había descubierto el peor de los secretos de Marcos, un desvío casi constante mes por mes de fondos, todos a la misma cuenta. No eran cifras enormes, pero eran lo suficientemente llamativas para romper la confianza, romper esa imagen de dueño de la verdad, la razón y la justicia que Marcos había creado sobre el mismo.
-La gente confía en nosotros- dijo Félix aquella tarde
Marcos en cambio no respondió se quedó en silencio, en ese silencio vio como un perro cruzaba la calle, más bien quiso verlo... giró el volante con violencia, el auto patinó, un poste de concreto apareció en medio del cristal justo al frente de Félix, luego un ruido, y luego silencio.
Félix quedó tranquilo como quien duerme en su asiento, Marcos con algunos golpes fue quien llamó a la ambulancia.
-Fue un perro- dijo a las patrullas-intenté esquivarlo
Y todos les creyeron, porque Marcos siempre decía la verdad, porque Marcos tenía una familia perfecta, porque Marcos era amigo de sus amigos...
Félix quedó en aquella cama, en aquel hospital, inerte, a la espera de un suspiro.
-Tal vez no despierte, tal vez lo haga, no hable no camine, no recuerde...-dijeron los médicos
-Despierta Félix, despierta., confesaré todo-pero Félix no despertaba
Mientras tanto Marcos seguía como siempre actuando como dueño de la verdad. Una mañana de domingo, bajo el tibio sol de la mañana, se atrevió a decir en una de las reuniones de vecino, junto a su esposa e hija:
-Tenemos que seguir unidos en la comunidad, la mentira solo deja grietas en nosotros.
Todos aplaudieron, todos menos su hija pequeña, muchos vecinos al terminar la reunión se acercaron a felicitarlo por sus palabras, por su sabiduría, y por ser ese hombre de negocios que siempre quiere lo mejor para su comunidad. Los ojos de Marcos se encendieron y por un momento olvidó que toda su vida dependía de una mentira.
El derrumbe de Marcos vino no de los muros de su trabajo, de aquella oficina que ocultaba secretos, vino del derrumbe de los muros de su casa.
Aquella tarde en la cena, Laura su hija, se llenó de valor y habló:
-Papá, eres un hipócrita
Marcos se quedó helado blanco como un papel. Fue el único diálogo de aquella cena mas a Marcos le bastó para comprender. Laura simplemente se levantó de la silla y se encerró en su habitación.
Desde el otro lado de la puerta, Marcos escuchó un sollozo contenido. Quiso llamarla, decirle algo, cualquier cosa que cosiera el silencio roto. Pero sus labios no obedecieron. Solo atinó a apoyar la frente en la madera fría y quedarse allí, escuchando cómo su hija lloraba a escondidas. Elena pasó a su lado sin mirarlo, subió las escaleras y también cerró una puerta. El eco de dos cerrojos fue su única compañía esa noche.
Aquella noche, cuando todas las luces se apagaron volvió a encenderse la luz del teléfono de Marcos, un mensaje nuevamente:
-Lo siento papá.
Laura salió por la ventana, sin avisar y fue a la estación de policía más cercana, en sus manos llevaba toda la verdad, el libro de cuentas privado de su padre, con cada transacción, y la voz grabada de él confesando en sueños. Y es que justamente cada noche, cuando todos dormían: Laura escuchaba a su padre llorar y confesar una y otra vez el crimen.
Nadie la vio marcharse. La luna se escondió detrás de las nubes como si no quisiera ser testigo. Laura caminó doce cuadras con el cuaderno apretado contra el pecho y el teléfono grabando en su bolsillo. No llevaba pulsera. Ya no necesitaba recordar que la mentira mata el alma porque lo sentía en cada paso. Al llegar a la comisaría, sus manos temblaban tanto que tardó casi un minuto en empujar la puerta de vidrio.
Realmente hay personas que mienten tanto que se convierte la mentira en una verdad absoluta en sus vidas. Es increíble este relato, pero tarde o temprano las mentiras siempre se revelan y la verdad sale ganando. Gracias por compartir esta historia tan interesante. 🤗
Muchas gracias por leer mi historia, bendiciones
They say lies have short legs," as a Serbian proverb goes. It’s hard when your daughter looks you in the eyes, tells you the truth—that you’re a hypocrite—and then takes the evidence to the police.
Laura made the right decision to expose her father for being a liar and a hypocrite. Have a good night.
A very illustrative story about the concept that pokes at the ways people deal with life and the extent to which they may go. Although, Marcos thought he could keep his secret from the world without knowing that it did not add up to his daughter, Laura who saw his mask fall off.
An excellent piece friend.
Your story really moved me because the fact that his own daughter decided to accuse him must have been the hardest blow for him—and for his family as well. The terrible consequences of betrayal.
Excellent story.
Best wishes and blessings @almadepoeta